Who will listen whin she cries?

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Lady Diana (Newborn Zoner) on Monday, 31-Jul-2006 0:46:20

Her song is lost,
her heart is gone.
Her time is near,
but she has no fear,
for whin she cries,
alone she lies,
among the trees and sand.
No one is there,
to take her hand,
and no one is there to hold her,
but still she lies,
alone she cries,
among the trees and sand.
It hurts to move,
because of her grevous wound,
but still she's strong,
and walks along,
her sight so clear.
She has no fear.

Post 2 by Musical Ambition (I've got the gold prolific poster award, now is there a gold cup for me?) on Monday, 31-Jul-2006 1:24:38

Wow, I liked this. I kind of wish it was a little longer though.

Post 3 by HauntedReverie (doing the bad mango) on Monday, 31-Jul-2006 11:01:50

a great poem and well written. But not all poems have to rhyme. How long have you been writing?

Post 4 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Wednesday, 02-Aug-2006 8:20:21

Excellent & powerful I like it.

Post 5 by Lady Diana (Newborn Zoner) on Monday, 07-Aug-2006 17:14:59

Not vary long. I love writing stories. And that poem just popped into my head.